We’re coming close to the end of the Plotting Your Novel series. These two steps are, for me, typically the most time-consuming but most rewarding steps of the entire process. This is where we actually plan out what’s going to happen for the entire book. It sounds overwhelming and it doesn’t work for everyone, but I’ve found that plotting the story chapter by chapter is the best way for me to approach a story. Not only does it help ensure there’s enough motivation for my characters to act the way they are, but it allows me to approach the story with enough conflict and stray from large plot holes.
Part 6 is the preliminary plot line. This can come any time during the first several steps of the plotting process. If you haven’t already, first start with Goal, Motivation and Conflict and establish any backstory you’ll need to know for specific things that need to happen during the story. And then I begin making what’s essentially a timeline of major and minor plot points. Sometimes these are known as turning points as well. The major plot points are key times in the story where an event or moment occurs, internally or externally to change your character’s course of action. To change their life as they know it. Minor plot points can do this on a smaller level. I also use these to mark simple events that I know I want to take place in the story. You can plot these out chronologically or randomly. I usually list as many events as I can on a sheet of paper. This includes major plot points, minor plot points, specific descriptions or conversations I want characters to have. I list as much as I can think of—anything that comes to mind, even if I don’t end up using it in the story later.
For me, this turns out to be several sheets of thoughts pouring out without much order, but I mark each one to make sure it’s a separate point on my plot line.
Then comes Part 8, the chapter by chapter outline. I enjoy planning out approximately how long each chapter will be and how many chapters I’ll need to write a book a specific length. My stories usually end up at least over 80,000 words so I know I’ll need at least 20 chapters and fairly lengthy ones at that. But even without planning this ahead of time, you can still plan your story chapter by chapter.
This is where your major and minor plot points come in handy. You can organize them in chronological order so they’re ready for your outline. In each chapter, I’ll mark as many things that happen as I can think of—usually from my plot timeline. Sometimes I get detailed enough to discuss how this effects the character(s) and I make notes if I want to mention this later on in the story. You can also separate the chapter into scenes and make note of which character’s POV this scene will be in. If you like to write your story from beginning to end without detouring to later chapters, then this is where you can put your ideas for specific conversations for later chapters if you already ideas.
So basically, each chapter will contain the number of scenes you want, the POV of each scene, the overall goal of each scene and if you can, the events that happen during that scene to bring you to that goal.
Again, this process isn’t the best or most productive process for everyone but it’s worked for me in the past. Next week, I’ll cover the last step in the Plotting Your Novel series which will wrap up the 9-step process I use to prepare my novels for writing.
For those planners out there, do you make a chapter by chapter outline to plot the progress of your story? If you’re not a planner, do you still write your stories in chronological order or do you skip around as ideas come to you?
I've been deviating from my outline and it's causing me to slow down--yet, I think I needed to do this as it will make the book better. If only I had more time to take my time and do things the way I really need them. I'm afraid my deadline will be upon me before I know it.
ReplyDeleteI write as thoughts come to me, most times in the shower.
ReplyDeleteI mean the thoughts come in the shower; I don't write there.
Let's invent a waterproof laptop and make tons of money!
Jeanette - I would buy your waterproof laptop. What I really want is a waterproof Kindle - so I can read ebooks in the bathtub :). I plot by scenes. I don't decide on chapter breaks until I'm in the editing stage.
ReplyDeleteGreat idea, Jeanette. I'd definitely use it, though my hubby and the kids might not like me spending so much time in the shower :)
ReplyDeleteSorry to those of you who commented earlier. I received the comments in my mailbox, so thanks for dropping by. I'm hoping they'll show up in the comment section here soon.
I think I need to get together with you for brainstorming! I keep grinding to a halt with my new story because I am a terrible plotter. I have read all the books but nothing seems to sink in for me. It takes me forever to get going, and I really hate the early stages of a book!!
ReplyDeleteGotta admit - doing that much planning scares me just a little bit! I start with a final scene in mind. Then I just write. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm a pantser turned plotter. When my agent asked me to rewrite a story I'd just spent months revising, I decided there had to be a better way. I was tired of deleting huge portions of my work. I embraced plotting, and I'm sold.
ReplyDeleteI plan as much as humanly possible but then eventually I have to give my characters free reign. I'm a push over like that.
ReplyDeleteI'm with Keli. I've gone back to organize my pants books so often, my next one will definitely be plotted long before I write the first chapter! Thanks Cindy!
ReplyDeleteThese outlining tips have been so helpful to me since I'm about to plan my next project. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThat's really thorough and must be such a help when actually sitting down to write.
ReplyDeleteI think I'm more of a half plotter. I usually will know what's going to happen for about half the chapters and the end. But it's kind of fuzzy and not real definite.
Catherine, I hear you about the early stages. They used to be THE MOST difficult part of a story for me. Ever since I started plotting, the beginnings have been smooth going. Brainstorming with other authors is a great idea to jump start your writing though--it never fails to amaze me how creative they can be :)
ReplyDeleteHi Cindy -
ReplyDeleteGotta admit - my brain's on tilt. I admire your ability to plot, but everything happens in my head.
Blessings,
Susan :)
Cindy, my brain is flatlining right now.
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I'm so impressed with your method! Wow.
I do write chronologically, always, but at the end of the story I sometimes have to go back and insert scenes, etc.
We are so much alike, it's scary! I plot out each chapter and each scene. When I'm writing, some scenes change, but overall, planning before I write saves me time and keeps me focused.
ReplyDeleteI plot by scene, and my chapters normally contain 4-5 scenes, so I loosely fill them in that way to start (I use yWriter, so everything is organized from the start in Chapters and Scenes). If the flow ends up going differently than I thought, I move scenes around as I'm writing (into the prev. or next chapter). I try to keep things sort of even though, when I can. :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is hard for me because I had to take my characters off the leash in my last WIP and they saved my novel from reading like cardboard. I find I need looser outlines than I originally structure. Great post today Cindy!
ReplyDeleteI don't do a chapter by chapter outline. Instead I have a plot graph and a timeline to help me along in the plotting of my story. Great post as usual.
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